Through the door…

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A shoebox…this is no ordinary shoebox. Look there is a hole, take a peek… You have found a new imaginary world. Wow, what is this world? What does it look like? Can you use your imagination and describe what you see, hear, smell, taste and touch in this new world?

You need to remember:

  • To write in full sentences
  • say how you entered your world
  • use powerful words to describe what you hear, see, smell, taste and touch
  • think about your spelling.
  • use capital letters and full stops correctly

Remember to read through your work before you post. Watch out for my comments to help you improve your work! The ones that wow me and use lots of descriptions will be rewarded.

Happy blogging Year 3. Spread the word about your new blog!
Enjoy and I look forward to reading your work! Miss Robson

74 thoughts on “Through the door…

  1. Wow this ls exciting! Here’s my little experience of this world. Hope you don’t mind me sharing it Miss Robson?

    As I peer down at the small rectangular opening on the box and take a peek inside, something truly amazing happens, I suddenly feel my heart pounding faster, my surroundings become blurred and then my body seems to be shrinking as my hearing becomes distorted I can hear the teachers discussions become all muffled. I suddenly find myself at the door opening and realise that I have shrunk down so I, rather confidently decide to jump inside the box. I’m immediately met with a kaleidoscope of fantastic metallic colours sun beaming into my eyes as it blinds me for a few seconds my eyes open again and I see an amazing world of paint! There’s coloured waterfalls and gigantic spider web trees that glisten in the purple sun. I step forward and the ground squelches and sucks up my footprints dispersing paint onto my feet when I move my foot forwards the colours change and leave pictures of my favourite artists behind. My belly roars as I’m starving with all the excitement, a gigantic fruit pastel cloud floats by so I imagine it raining, just then it’s like the box can read my thoughts because a glitter shower appears and I feel intrigued to hold my hands out to grab the glitter as it drops, Looking at it closely I decide to sprinkle a little glitter dust into my mouth, Wow it’s like space dust and starts to tingle on my tongue, leaving a rhubarb and custard taste it’s delicious as I open my mouth again it begins to crackle and pop in the air. I giggle to myself and wonder ‘this is like my dream world there’s colours everywhere it’s like an artists paradise’ so I decide to call it “art life awaking” for now. There are soft and cuddly looking cushions all over the floor with pictures of famous artists on. A spinning mirror ball reflecting all my favourite sculptures and mosaics around the walls and floors. It’s extremely quiet in here, I found myself talking to myself about the experiences I have discovered and then realising I have been in here for a while so I must try to make my way back to the door I came through. As I turn around my footprints light up so I decide to follow them, I’m feeling so relaxed and very calm. I see an opening showing the opening and jump through it. Feeling the same changes as I shrunk down to go inside I feel the reverse coming outside. I open my eyes and see the black box again. I smile to myself, definitely knowing I shall revisit to discover more about my private world!

  2. my imaganary world is candy land.
    Once upon a time there were three
    ginger bread man. they found a small box they had to get the key to
    open it and make it bigger.When all
    three of them found the key they opend it . it was not there world it was another candy world but with lots more things.the smell was choclate the taste of the stuff was appel what they could see was a rolocaster a marshmello christmas tree they went too all of them things then 1 said i enjoyed it then the other said i think we shold go back? then the other 2 said nooo! then that one said okay then they lived happly ever afer the end.

      • Ashia, did the Gingerbread Men meet any other characters and if so were they friendly or scary? Did they eat any of the candy in this world? I know I would have! mmmmm

  3. As i step forward, i can see elagent faries dancing on swan lake.Snow flakes float in the sky like a butterfly. Over to the left i smell a fragrance that smells like cookies also i can hear my favourate pop bandsfrom far away.To the right princesses have a party.Altogther they play on sparkly instruments a beautiful tune. The sercrut hideout is were swan lake is and you have to go to the Oak tree and enter this code, 24476708565. If you don’t you will be cursted.

  4. As I walked through the door I saw a candey side thay were good but the chocolate side are bad I had to pick which side I would live on! I pick candey world Like my dad.WE hade FUN there and I have a candey store and If I ran out of candey I could go and pick them from out side YUMYUM!Whilst WE were having FUN chocolat people hade a plan to DESTROY candey planet and take over the world for her own.But candy planet knew What there evil scheme was.They tried to pretend that they had a plan .So they had a war DUN DUN DUN…Candy world won but they did’nt destroy them they said: come on lets see the good ness in you.chocolate people:Ok.and so they hae candy world and chocolate land and they lived Happily ever after the end .

    Characters:Latesha :girl darren :dad. Tomey.Jasmin and donnell: chocolate people . Lavender:Queen of candy world .

  5. My imaganary world is called FrostyLand. In FrostyLand everyone is very well behaved except EVIL JACK FROST. Jack Frost likes to ruin all the parties! Luckily there are some good fairies and a pixie to stop the trouble in FrostyLand! “I have a plan”said the snow fairy.”TELL US TELL US TELL US”said the pixie and the frost fairy excitedly.”Okay,okay!”said the snow fairy. “We should sneak up to Jack Frost’s ice palace, and put some drops of a potion that I still need to make and we will put it inside his soup!”said the snow fairy.”Let’s put in some honey icicles,water,snow drops and a touch of pixie dust to make it extra strong!”said the frost fairy.So they set of looking for the first object and guess who found it first the pixie!”I’ve found the honey icicles!”she said….To be continued!

  6. I would love to see those children who have written on the blog to write their improvements and see more year 3 children blogging. Spread the word

  7. ok miss im going to write an improve sentece
    There was a world called Every Thing town it had every thing.
    it looked cool because when it was day the sky was night when it was night the sky was day. When you breathe in it tastes like cake.I enterd my world normaly how you would enter door.I hear people talking.i have improve it.

  8. I saw a box on the table, as i walked towards it i saw a door so i got closer but i tripped tripped I felt myself falling and falling. when I landed I wasn’t in the class anymore. where was I? I could hear the rumbling of thunder. I could see blue bolts of lighting hitting the ground. The air smelt like it was on fire and tasted yukky and hot. I could feel the icy cold hail hitting my skin. I was petrified and scared. where was I? as another bolt of lighting struck near by I could shee shapes of small building and people moving. was they people? I was getting freaked out now. as I put my hands in my pocket to keep warm a found something what was this? how did it get there? I pulled out a tourch and switched it on it was so bright I could see every thing now………….TO BE CONTINUED

  9. when i went though the door i was falling into shine land were everything is shiny instaid i’m going to call it shine craft.

  10. My imaginary world is called Frosty Land. In Frosty Land there are trees made out of candy canes, Gingerbread houses and inside the houses there are beds, the beds are made out of marshmallows. There are also some people who are, fairies, a pixie, a kind snowman and someone EVIL! All the lakes are made out of chocolate and there are also some gingerbread people and the clothes they wear are made out of icing (any colour icing).

    I’ve changed it Miss Robson!

          • My next imaginary world is called Fun Land! In Fun Land there are houses out of gingerbread and the roofs out of sugar. There are also some ride’s like Ferris Wheels, Spinning Teapots, Carousel, Arcades and LOADS more! Also in Fun Land there is THE SMILER!!!! There are some people… But not ordinary people they are gingerbread people and their clothes are made out of icing (any colour icing). :)

          • I would love to go to Funland but could you describe what gingerbread people are like so I have an idea before I meet them

        • Ok Miss Robson.
          The gingerbread people are kind but when you are mean to their friends, they get ANGRY! If you have nowhere to go, the gingerbread people will let you stay with them in their home’s and every day for breakfast, they give you sweets and chocolate like dolly mixture, gummy bears, haribo’s, jelly beans, kinder bueno, chocolate nice cream (made by Mr Willy Wonka), twix, kitkat, mars bars and toblerone!

  11. Ginger bread world!

    It was a ordinary day at school, I had finished my work for day. I looked around the classroom I saw
    a box with a hole in the middle. As
    I walked towards the wooden box I
    Was curioser and curios er to see
    what is inside. When I put my eye
    though the hole and the classroom started to spin and spin until I was inside the box!

    I landed with a bump onto the most softest grass I have ever felt.
    As I stood up all I could hear was
    Children laughing about and singing,it was a wonder full sound .As I looked closer it wasn’t children they were Ginger bread children!
    Three Ginger bread children invited me to a dinner party. As I walked
    Though there house I smelt fresh baking and a lot of ginger, 1 of the Ginger Children said we better get you home before your mother goes looking for you. The end.

  12. my imaganary world is candy land.
    Once upon a time there were three
    ginger bread man. they found a small box they had to get the key to
    open it and make it bigger.When all
    three of them found the key they opend it . it was not there world it was another candy world but with lots more things.the smell was choclate the taste of the stuff was apple what they could see was a rolocoster a marshmello christmas tree they went too all of them things then 1 said i enjoyed it then the other said i think we shold go back? then the other 2 said nooo! then that one said okay then they lived happly ever after the end. all i dont no how to spell is marshmello rolocoster and imaginry

  13. In a hole could be a magic garden,with colorful flowers that smell power full,with some of the flowers that taste of fresh fruit, like apples,oranges,strawberry,lemons,limes.

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